9 July: A Six Sentence Story

B&W crow sitting on a bed's footboard

13 of 27 – Stillrift: Peace Earned from Ruin

Let It Become Weather

It didn’t feel like peace when it came—just the absence of argument, like a room forgetting your name.

That night, Felreil appeared as a crow on the footboard of Brigid’s bed, dropping black stones onto her feet—each one etched with a word she’d swallowed: sorry, stay, why.

When she woke, she felt lighter—as if the crow had carried something away with it when it left—and out where Caledonian pines stitched shadows into the loam, silence came to her as clarity.

She left Connor’s ring on the cottage table without ceremony.

Brigid traces the indent on her finger where the gold had been: a ghost-band, Stillrift’s mark—the kind of peace that only breeds when ruin has burned every map.

And somewhere on the edges of his wings, Felreil scribbles: Some silences are vaults—and some are just tombs.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “breed”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

18 responses to “9 July: A Six Sentence Story”

      1. S: superb I: ink

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  1. This is haunting- beautiful, but haunting too.

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    1. Lovely comment. Thank you.

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  2. “when all the maps have been burned …”

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  3. Oh! I misquoted! The original is even worse! 😂

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  4. Nice phrase: “out where Caledonian pines stitched shadows into the loam”

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    1. Thank you, Frank!

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  5. Letting what is ruined go does bring a kind of peace. I think we pass through so fast most rooms forget our name before we’ve even made an impression.

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    1. That is so, Mimi. It is peculiar effort that allows one to slow down.

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  6. Ooh very haunting… and no maps now.

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  7. fave phrase: “...pines stitched shadows into the loam.”

    quietly engaging Six

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