24 June: dVerse Haibun

The Forest, Midsummer Dawn (a haibun)

The path underfoot unspools like an old spell—threading through oak older than the word amen, older than the sun that still drips dew with sleep. Ferns uncurl at my ankles. Flint glints like forgotten teeth, and a pony stirs in the bracken… her breath steams a weave of mist.

Listen! Hear that? A woodpecker carves its message into bark—patient, precise, the forest’s morse for those who listen. There’s no walking quickly here; the hush invites no hurry. Only remembering.

hoofprints in loam—
the earth still carries echoes
of other riders.


Written for DVerse Poets: a summer haibun. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

30 responses to “24 June: dVerse Haibun”

    1. I just smiled all the way through this beautiful song, through the sound of water trickling over stones, and birds and rain. Quite exquisitely perfect.

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  1. I didn’t know where this forest is but I feel like I was there. This should be in a book.

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    1. Thank you! ❤️

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  2. A delightful walk in the forest, Marilyn! The phrase ‘The path underfoot unspools like an old spell’ is a perfect hook, and I love the ‘ferns uncurl[ing] at my ankles’ and flint glinting ‘like forgotten teeth’. I’ve heard a woodpecker only once so far this year, and miss ‘the forest’s morse’.  I also love the horsey haiku.

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    1. Thank you, Kim. I’m absolutely delighted that you enjoyed this one.

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      1. My pleasure, Marilyn.

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  3. Oh wow, oh wow, I just loved this, I could feel and smell this forest and fell into its dreamlike quality. Beautiful and mysterious. Loved it!

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    1. Thank you very much for your lovely comment.

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  4. Decoded woodpecker’s Morse message: “In this forest, then becomes now until it becomes (and remains) tomorrow.”

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    1. That’s it! That’s what I heard too. 🥰

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  5. Beautifully written! I love your description of the forest and the old oaks!

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    1. Thank you so much. 🙏

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  6. Your usual high standard. Was right there. Echoed the way I feel when I’m out there in nature. One uses all the senses.

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    1. Yes, all of them, and it will return all of itself to us. Thank you, Petru.

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  7. I love the magic of the walk… midsummer is a great time for sorcery.I hope you will have the possibility to submit to the anthology https://dversepoets.com/coming-soon-2026-anthology/

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    1. I am so glad that you enjoyed reading about my midsummer walk, and yes, I will make time to submit a few of my. dVerse poems for the anthology. Thank you.

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  8. Beautiful. I used the word Liam today too. In a story though, but still, great minds you know….😉

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    1. Thank you, Violet. The only ‘great mind’ here is yours. 🤗

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  9. Lovely!!! This last sentence of the haibun would be a nice haiku, too, although not in 5-7-5 (but who’s counting?)

    There’s no walking quickly here

    the hush invites no hurry

    Only remembering.

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    1. Thank you!

      If I were to rewrite it, perhaps: There’s no quickly here / the hush invites no hurry / only remember. But I think I’ll leave the original untouched. ❤️

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  10. I love this text:

    the hush invites no hurry. Only remembering.

    Beautiful image, too!

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    1. Thank you very much. I’m glad you stopped by for a read.

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  11. A captivating experience of summer! Brava!

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    1. Thank you, Frank. It was a pleasure to write—good prompt.

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  12. Delightful… especially since it’s glorious summer!

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    1. Stay warm and cosy, Chris. (thank you xx)

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