26 May: A Six – The Book of 27

#8 of 27: Glimmourne – A Colour Once Felt, Not Seen
B&W image young woman and man dressed in black wearing hat, backstage in theatre.
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#8 of 27: Glimmourne – The ache of beauty that betrays you

She stands in the back corridor after the show, still wearing the silk-and-lace dress the audience said made her look like fire, smiling the way they taught her—teeth, dimples, neck exposed like trust on display.

Felreil waits at the exit, not blocking the way—only standing still in the doorway, where the glow doesn’t quite reach and the truth doesn’t need to.

She walks toward him slowly, heels clicking like questions, clutching the roses they gave her for being unforgettable—roses that already smell like funerals.

Just before she passes him, she hesitates, tilts her head, and says—not to him exactly, but to the air between them—“Do you think they saw me… or just the shimmer?”

Felreil doesn’t blink, doesn’t answer—only reaches out and gently touches one petal, which turns brown beneath his fingertip as if the Colour had been waiting to die.

She leaves without waiting for a reply, and though her smile stays on her face, her shadow does not follow.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “Lace”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

15 responses to “26 May: A Six – The Book of 27”

  1. i think we are all just waiting with bated breath for her to become a trainwreck we can really wrap our words around. How sad.

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    1. yes, it is, Violet. And thanks.

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    1. Yes, such a dramatic and beautiful song. Thank you.

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  2. Nice phrase: “where the glow doesn’t quite reach and the truth doesn’t need to”

    Interesting ending with her shadow not following her as she left.

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    1. Thank you, Frank. As for that shadow—all depends on where the light comes from.

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  3. “...neck exposed like trust on display.”

    fave phrase*

    *Frank’s getting to my other most-enjoyed notwithstanding…. Mr. Hubney, dude, stop with the pre-citing my favorite lines yo

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    1. It’s one of those phrases that poets adore; it toys with one’s tongue—gives it a workout. Glad you liked that one.

      I suspect that our very kindly Mr Hubney is an early riser.

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  4. Breath-taking… and beautiful. But, oh, those roses are already beginning to die (as always).

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    1. Aaah, I am heaping thanks all over you.

      Yes, cut flowers never last more than a week (at most). I used to have a corner of the garden dedicated to flowers willing to be cut and brought indoors. I don’t anymore—I prefer to watch them dance in the breeze and grow strong against the wind.

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  5. Oh, for someone to see past the shimmer.

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    1. Yes. And you’ve identified the colour called Glimmourne, Mimi. 🤗

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  6. A fragile kind of glamour, as time has more power than normal human will. But shimmer on, for the brief, sharp pleasure it brings! Haunting…

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