4 Dec: A Six – Brighton Rock

man and woman walking with dog on Brighton beach with the pier in the background

Beyond an Intersection Named After an English King and a Saint
Six Sentence Story: Day 2

Title: Brighton Rock

By midday, we are relaxing on striped sun loungers in the shadow of Brighton Palace Pier, watching Hünga dance with waves whose rhythm orchestrates every movement of his playful partner, but beneath the pier, the waves feel dark and sinister; an iron nave with seagulls flying between the pillars like scared birds caught in a cathedral.

Nick points his cane, “Waves – an eternal lover’s argument with the shore,” he says as each one roars across the stone shingle and then whisper out again, depleted of its rigour, the tide pulling secrets from the pebbles that shift and clatter.

I’m reading one of the books that I’ve always wanted to read while Nick unties the twine from the brown paper parcel, ” … just a little surprise,” I say (it contains a lighter, a guillotine cutter and twenty Hoyo de Monterrey Double Corona cigars).

“What are you reading?” Nick asks, and I turn the book cover towards him, “Brighton Rock, by Graham Greene,” … “Read to me, Brigid” he smiles.

“… Fred Hale knew, before he had been in Brighton three hours, that they meant to murder him, he with his newspaper-inky fingers and his bitten nails, his manner cynical and nervous, anybody could tell he didn’t belong – belong to the early summer sun, the cool Whitsun wind off the sea, the holiday crowd who came in by train, stepping off into fresh, glittering air…” and I nod in the direction of the Palace Pier and say, “Pinkie Brown is about to murder Fred Hale over there.”

Nick clips, toasts and draws the fire’s heat through the cigar – listens to me read – listens to the mechanical groans of carnival rides on the pier, the laughter and the calliope music … and in a voice that seems old as earth he says, “I think the dog is hungry – Hünga would murder for some fish and chips … ”


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the word “parcel”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

18 responses to “4 Dec: A Six – Brighton Rock”

    1. I was drawn to his voice the first time I heard it, but his lyrics – his lyrics could crush a heart. Such a wonderfully perfect soundtrack. Thank you.

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  1. “…Hünga would murder for some fish and chips … But before that” Nick called Hunga and pointed to that weird sand dune nearby; ” Go, boy…bring it”.

    Brigid pauses her reading of a story of murder & love, of guilt & faith, of the perpetual conflict between evil & good, and starts untying the twine from the sepia paper parcel Hunga unearthed and gently placed on her lap.

    “That’s why you two insisted on me going back to the car, eh?” she said with the young sparkle in her eyes, flamed by the everlasting joy of a surprise gift.

    The cover of the 300 pages book read : The Power Of Myth by Joseph Campbell – “It’s the from the 1988 series of interviews with Bill Moyers” Nick said.

    “No, thank you ” he continued, leaving Brigid’s upcoming thankyou to be silently exhaled towards the sea.

    “Some people refuse to see the importance of myth, not only to our culture but our own personal life / journey… fairy tales are for children, they say… but we know better” quoth the Gatekeeper with a wink.

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    1. (you little dickens….)
      Precisely so. And when I finish reading it, I know a person who will greatly benefit from its insight. Myth creates identity within society. It makes us think about life’s mysteries; they’re rich in symbolism, and narratives about universal truths and our connections with one another. I shall treasure this gift. Thank you, Nick. And giving Hünga a kiss on the top of his head, “and thanks to you, too.” Now, let’s find some fish and chips wrapped in brown paper, and I know just the place.

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  2. Nice description of waves engaging in a lover’s argument with the shore.

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    1. Thank you, Frank! Can’t you just hear them crashing and clashing about.

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      1. Yes, a family feud. 🙂

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  3. Waves – an eternal lover’s argument with the shore,”*

    *a WICUWT!**

    **Wish I’d Come Up With That! quote

    fun Six… wonder what Joe C would’ve made of the blogsphere

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    1. I’m sure that Colleoni would want in on the action! Glad you enjoyed this Six, Clark.

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  4. An ideal Day 2 (save for the waves beneath the pier casting an unseen shadow) for Nick, Brigid and Hünga.
    By virtue of this scene being set at the beach pretty much insures a perfect day. And you know… when the dog is hungry, he needs to eat!

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    1. Swimming below one of these old Victorian piers is a death wish but silly people do it every year. Anyway … delighted you enjoyed a fun day at the beach. And Hünga says, “Woof!”

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  5. And if supper did not call, we’d never leave the strand, would we.

    Just so you know, I’m glad you laughed at my six, I was laughing, too, even right after it happened. This, and the adventure with the car, and other such craziness is always going on in my life, and it leaves me giggling over the absurdity of it all.

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    1. I love the way you structure your Thankfuls – it’s like sitting across the table from you with a cup of tea while you tell me about your week.

      I might have to dash off for a toilet from time to time, although those are few and far between in England, as N will confirm … but otherwise, you’re quite right – let’s stay on the beach.

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  6. Oh yes, the strand, the strand… for me too.

    And yet, should I read again: Brighton Rock by GG – I read it back in school.

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    1. Yes, read it again. It’s a fabulous book.

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  7. Ga’mouflebranze; today I was led to this via Devil’s Dyke and the Fir Tree etheree challenge of dVerse (for which you gave me a like) :-).

    Oh Misky/Brighid, I felt-sense that I’ve found another arm/branch/twig of my Tribe…

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    1. Glad you found your way here, Kathy! Thanks for your lovely comment.

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