26 Nov: A Six – The Devil’s Dyke

Beyond an Intersection Named After an English King and a Saint
Six Sentence Story: Day 1

Road Trip: The Devil’s Dyke

Hünga, Nick and Brigid

“… the proof is in Devil’s Dyke,” I say.

Nick, Hünga and I are in an open meadow, looking down at a deep V-shaped groove in a hill, “The story goes that the Devil said he’d dig a trench with his tail, and punish the new Christian converts by flooding Sussex with seawater, but a nun and a hermit, (his name is Cuthman; I don’t know her name), made a wager with the Devil that if he finished this task before sunrise, the Devil could take Cuthman’s soul, but if the Devil failed, he’d go away and never return to Sussex again.”

Nick leans into his cane, looking quietly at the wide view of green fields and villages scattered about with their thousand-year-memories, “It’s like a landscape painting, this view,” he says, and I suspect that the Gatekeeper observes every ripple in a stream, every wandering leaf and every twilight fading hill, and keeps it all in his head, “Beautiful,” he says softly,

“ …and then what?” he refers me back to the Devil and his tail.

“Hours before the sun climbs out of the east horizon, the nun lights a candle and Cuthman-the-hermit starts crowing cock-a-doodle-doo like a rooster, and the devil thinks the burning candle is the rising sun, and that the rooster is announcing morning, and off the Devil flees, never to return – sort of like one of Hercules’s labours with those Stymphalian Birds.

We stroll back to the car through wildflowers tall and weedy, whites and opal-pinks that brush against our knees, bees up and settling down again on tuneful wings, and the salty scent from the sea reaching us from the other side of the hill … and my heart is light that Nick hasn’t, as some might, suggested that there is nothing in this meadow but grass and trees; Devil’s Dyke is the proof of his measure … (and a friendship unspoken).

Nick calls for Hūnga who comes running like a shadow of velvety black through billows of pollen – he is the battle-ready King without fury or harm in his heart, and he lies between us in the cool grass, his head on Nick’s foot like an angel’s feather, and I rub the top of Hünga’s head (and think to myself, ‘Here’s lies the King, so where’s the Saint’).


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the word “shadow” Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

22 responses to “26 Nov: A Six – The Devil’s Dyke”

  1. And the journey begins!
    Outside Brighton, which is close to Beachy Head Cliffs – a place I love and flew over and about.

    If you still have any worries, M, about writing The Gatekeeper true… have none.
    ( You even got spot on his clothes at the photo!)

    I love how Christian tales have The Morning Star get fooled by a fake morning… ( nope, ain’t happening Brightonians😆)

    Perfect start, Brigid!

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    1. I am so pleased. Thank you, N. And thank you for Estas … he is magic to my ears.I

      I’ve always found it fascinating that mankind needs to explain away everything, even an astonishingly deep V-groove between hills.

      (ps: caption updated)

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      1. Well, you will excuse my linkage of one of the Lucifer Sixes I have wrote… Devil’s Dyke ‘n all..

        Father of Sin

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        1. Oh my way … with a cup of tea.

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  2. Wonderful tale — but as Spira says: I doubt we should proceed in our dealings with the Adversary believing he is that easily duped! Love the imagery and the ending. https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2024/11/fallen-world.html

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    1. Aaah, Roland, my thanks to you and your expertise in writing fiction. It’s greatly appreciated.

      This new series is apt to ‘travel’ on and on for weeks as Nick, Hünga and Brigid drive to the Scottish Highlands, and then back to Brighton again. I hope you’ll find time to join us.

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      1. damn, I love the side-jam sparked by our compatriot, Nick (and Roland) … if I may be so bold, to jump in, for just a couple of bars…

        https://wakefielddoctrine.com/2019/01/03/six-sentences-one-story-the-wakefield-doctrine/

        ..will comment properly below (just gots to shake my inner Beavis and Butt-head who grabbed the mic when I saw the title)

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        1. Comments are closed over at yours on this post, so I’ll reply here. This is a masterly woven tale (and done in only 6 sentences!) that leaves one to fill in the visual elements. I felt as if I overheard the conversation. Nicely done.

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  3. I’m sure they’ll have a grand adventure, it certainly has had an excellent start.

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    1. Thank you, Mimi. Time for a new footing.

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  4. Indeed it is, an excellent beginning to Brigid’s road trip. Well done, Misky.

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    1. Thank you, Denise.

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  5. How delightful. I was wondering where there was time to paint a picture outside; just an easel, paper and a few watercolours, eh Nick.🖼️

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    1. Thank you so much, Chris.

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    2. Nah…I will leave that to Brigid… she is excellent with watercolours ( apart from driving her Porsche like nobody’s business).

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  6. I am glad to hear Cuthman and the nun outwitted the devil.

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  7. Gotta re-read a time or two more. (Your story telling mastery has stimulated the ‘how the heck did she do that’ with a tale both engaging, interesting and fun to follow-along with)

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    1. I’ll take that praise, and be happy with it all day. Thank you!

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  8. Beautiful prose and picture. I’m n.v stopping for a moment to steep this lovely tea.

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    1. Thank you so much! ☺️

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