26 Sept: A Six – Three Months After That Day

AI art: night scene, starry sky with crescent moon, a chair and a lantern, view toward the sea
AI art: night scene, starry sky with crescent moon, a chair and a lantern, view toward the sea

At an Intersection Named After an English King and a Saint
Six Sentence Story: Part 30

August 1975: Three Months After that Day


Down at the sand, where the tide throws itself forward like a wreck in cold unconquered lines, foaming against all hope, my father stands next to me and says, “Brigid, find the quiet and calm within yourself – as always, you’ll find it.”

I gaze out where shadows cover the cold ocean’s indifference. No ship is coming for me; my ship is scattered to the wind – bone and ash.

And when darkness fell, I was still there … alone.
Still gazing where my shadow once fell.

I decided it was time to move on, return to my roots, where our story began.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story to include the word “wreck”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

20 responses to “26 Sept: A Six – Three Months After That Day”

  1. It such situations, it sounds like good advice to return to one’s roots.

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    1. Yes, it would seem so.

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  2. The short sentences are very effective here in conveying her sense of reflection and then resolve.

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    1. Thank you very much.

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  3. Excellently written, Misky! As D pointed out, Brigid’s reflection and resolve are clear to see.

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    1. Thank you, Nicole!

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  4. Liked the simplicity. (Made me read up on etching.)

    Fine lines, complex effect on the Viewer/Reader

    cool

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    1. Thank you. Not sure where the ‘etching’ is but glad you thought it was cool. LOL

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      1. in the sense of scene (and characters and dialogue and such) being drawn simply with clean lines… as opposed to an oil painting, watercolor or, according to some reviewers of the Doctrine, finger paints.

        lol

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        1. Ah. I see. Thank you.

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    1. An absolutely mesmerising video that suits the music perfectly, and that particular moment. Thank you.

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  5. Short but so well done – it’s more than just words…

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    1. Thank you, Chris. ❤️

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  6. A wonderful example of “less is more”. More to the point, the starkness of the sentences draws us in immediately. As others have indicated, the “simplicity” of this piece holds so much more than the number of words written.

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    1. I’m so pleased that you had a chance to read it. Thank you! And now a new week with a new word begins!!

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  7. Too many waste a life waiting for the ship. It sounds like she won’t.

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  8. So much power in your focus of time & place.

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    1. Thank you so very much

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