10 Sept: A Six – Part: 27 June’s Strawberry Moon

elderly woman standing in front of house in the forest
elderly woman standing in front of house in the forest

At an Intersection Named After an English King and a Saint
Six Sentence Story: 1965: The Night of June’s Strawberry Moon

1965: The Night of June’s Strawberry Moon

And I say, ” …hours before, the sky was a fruity blush colour, but now in this fading light the full Strawberry Moon hangs low and lonely, shiny as a pearl button fastening the hour to darkness.

I lie awake in bed, listening to the heels of Grandmother’s shoes as they clip along the granite kitchen floor; she’s punching the air out of bread dough, kneading it into tight little balls of saffron buns while whistling a tune thin as a piccolo.

It’s a tune without name, without words, without beginning or end, and it will haunt me when I’m an adult.

And there’s a rooster calling to the dim freshness of morning as the clock in the hallway chimes four times … Grandmother slips a woollen blanket around her shoulders and disappears into the forest with the other women, the wise ones, she is the old one.

That morning I follow her, and she turns to see me, smiles and says, ‘I forgot to close the garden gate; be home with you, Brigid,’ … and I am chased by the wind, retracing my tracks through morning dew while the church bells call out a warning of peril to young ones who venture beyond garden gates.”

And Hanzō leans back in his chair, he smiles volumes beyond what words can express, “Hai,” he says … and I ask if he’s been with the Gatekeeper; “Hai” and “Aye” sounding so similar to my ear.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, include the word “punch”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

22 responses to “10 Sept: A Six – Part: 27 June’s Strawberry Moon”

    1. Another perfect soundtrack choice! Hai!

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  1. Lovely. I like the line about the tune that will haunt her as an adult.

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    1. Thank you, Dorothy! I’m delighted that you enjoyed this one.

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  2. Nice description of tunes from one’s youth that “haunt” one with memories. I also liked your description of the ominous garden gates. I wonder where her grandmother was going.

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    1. Thank you, Frank. One must be careful with those garden gates!

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  3. quietly entrancing scene… hate to return, even if only a Reader (with delusions of identifying with fictional characters)

    ‘cellent Six

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    1. I can’t thank you enough for such a lovely and encouraging response, so I’ll just say … many thanks, Clark.

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  4. Your description of the fading light of the full Strawberry moon as “shiny as a pearl button fastening the hour to darkness” is exquisite, Misky.

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    1. Thank you so much, Denise. I’m glad that phrase resonated with you.

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  5. Did you ever find out where the wise ones would go so early in the day? The memories of those young years are like gossamer, thin but strong.

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    1. Gossamer, a perfect description of it. From what I’ve read, every time an old memory is recalled your brain slightly rewrite writes it, so it’s actually difficult to know just how precise our childhood memories are. And I must clarify, almost (almost!) everything I write is fiction. ❤️ Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment.

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  6. An enchanting scene, Misky. The line “whistling a tune thin as a piccolo” stood out to me, and “shiny as a pearl button fastening the hour to darkness” is exquisite.

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    1. thank you so much, Nicole for the lovely comment. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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  7. Delightful. I particularly liked the full moon… the June strawberry moon is perfect.

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    1. thanks Chris, I always appreciate knowing when something resonates with the reader.

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  8. Wonderfully descripive. The sights, the sounds, simply perfect.

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  9. this is a beautiful story. i’m sad that “you” were turned away … i’m curious to know what happened in the forest when a grandmother and her friends waved goodbye to the strawberry moon and welcomed the sun. ❤

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    1. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Maybe one day we’ll find out. 🤗

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