27 August: The Reality of Real

A Cadralor Poem

The Reality of Real
I.
the stones aren’t real. a palette knife edges
the cement, chipped paint stone grey matte.

II.
her shopping bag hangs limp. flaccid. handle
hooks over her shoulder. recycled. real plastic.

III.
he texts women should be sweetlipped and
gentle. She replies, “pillock. you’re unreal”.

IV.
it’s august heat but she wears a woolly scarf.
her fiancé gave it to her. she really loves him.

V.
she thought he loved her too but she has his
phone, and she reads he loves someone else.


Written for What Do You See and Ragtag Daily Prompt: Flaccid. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

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15 responses to “27 August: The Reality of Real”

    1. I love her voice, her sass, and this song. Thank you!

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  1. So many stories in this one poem of yours Misky. Thank you so much for joining in.

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    1. It was fun. Enjoyed writing to the image.

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      1. Many thanks 🙏🏼

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  2. You can feel her world falling apart at the end.

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    1. Certainly someone’s world will fall apart but it won’t be hers. 😂

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  3. I like this! Things are about to change methinks

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    1. Methinks you think correctly!

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  4. Your words are a gem of stories: each facet showing us a new level to her pain. We live in a faux world sadly. Your skill is masterful. https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2024/08/mortality-has-its-compensations-chapter.html

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    1. Oh Roland, you do a girl’s ink joy. Thank you.

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  5. Oh, clever, clever! Interesting about a Cadralor poem – I haven’t come across one of those before.

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    1. Thank you. I just love this poem form. I see I forgot to link to the rules of form. You can read them at https://gleampoets.org/about/ (scroll down to the “blue” section)

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      1. Ah, excellent – I might give it a go. Good to know where it comes from… and so recent as well.

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