29 May: A Six – Part 11: I Walk With Ghosts

B&W, man standing on a stone bridge

At an Intersection Named After an English King and a Saint
Six Sentence Story: Part 11, I Walk With Ghosts

I’m walking home in the rain from the Six Sentence Cafe and Bistro, my face damp and the wet clinging to my legs. The dim streets are lined with starved and empty warehouses with windows dim with dust.

I hear feet thudding softly, now and then splashing, my pace quickens, and I regret not insisting that Pierre walk me home …

“Three blocks,” I tell him, “it’s not a problem.”

And in this silent night-drowned place, I see you, my Connor, standing on Oxley bridge looking into the river – you are a dark echo that lifts oxygen from the air.

I felt you stir when Scott Buckley’s I Walk With Ghosts hummed from my stereo speakers, … and then you turn and look at me with that broad lazy smile of yours.

And like warm breath on a frosty morning, you vanish … and leave me, again.


Previous instalments of this story: Part 1: The Pull Back   Part 2: The Measure of Her    Part 2: The Gatekeeper’s Response  Part 3: The Colour of Walls   Part 4: Tectonic Shifts  Part 5: Out of the Frying Pan  Part 6: How to Break Eggs Part 7: A Moon River  Part 8: Starlight Shines on the Roof  Part 9: Before When  Part: 9.1 Flower Power Part: 10 To Trace a Curl  Part: 11 I Walk With Ghosts

To access all of the instalments on one page, please use this link.

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, include the word “lift”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

16 responses to “29 May: A Six – Part 11: I Walk With Ghosts”

    1. Yes, perfection

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  1. You set a moody scene…

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    1. I’ll have to turn the knob up a bit next week 🤣

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      1. I’ll be looking for that tweak

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  2. Nice phrase: “a dark echo that lifts oxygen from the air” I see Connor’s a ghost.

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    1. Yes he certainly is. Thanks, Frank.

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  3. Almost there… and then he’s gone again. Next time?? Loving this, Misky.

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    1. Maybe next time! Glad you’re enjoying it.

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  4. You set the mood for spooky and you got it.

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    1. Thanks, Mimi. What’s a ghost story without spooky!

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  5. You’ve turned it up another notch, Misky. Brava!

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    1. Thank you so much, Denise! Glad you enjoyed it.

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  6. “...my face damp and the wet clinging to my legs.

    Show, not tell much

    Such an excellent set of words, their slightly ethereal tenor a brush on the cheek in the dark… for the Reader

    (This kind of writing is what keeps me coming back to reading bloghops, as a total adherent to the princople (in magic) of contagion. So, thanks for the cool wordage.)

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    1. I am delighted beyond words that you enjoyed reading this one. Thank you, Clark.

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  7. Sets a mood and scene, so melancholic. I need a warm blanket and soft square of linen, a late-night toddy for comfort…

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