5 March: for Six Sentence Story

B&W photo of chalk hills on England's southeast coastline near the old coastguard cottages at Cuckmere Haven

Sitting on a Bench Dedicated to Those Who Felt the Need to Jump

There’s something about the beauty of this place, Beachy Head, that draws people in and magnifies that terrifying first rush of one more morning … one part not wanting to be in pain, one part beyond numb, one part wishing for another fabric of eternity, one part calling in a promise from an ace of spades, one part a return to the light of childhood, the street, the house, the river, the cat or the dog.

There’s an impassable rawness in the nature here – chalk cliffs that coax emotions over the edge … not a place for unsteady feet.

I come here often, just to feel alive, to feel awake, to remember who I am, to be rocked and slapped by the unforgiving hand of the Atlantic’s wind.

“Good morning, madam, says the Beachy Head chaplain who oversees souls searching for an epilogue, “Are you okay?”.

“I am gloriously okay, thank you,” I reply, “and how are you, chaplain … he smiles and looks out to sea toward the faint shores of France. I suspect not many ask after his well-being.


This photo was taken nearby the old Coastguard Cottages at Cuckmere Haven, Seaford in Sussex. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose. The prose is written to Denise’s Six Sentence Story prompt and includes the word “ace”. ©Misky 2006-2024.

17 responses to “5 March: for Six Sentence Story”

  1. A fabulous photo and a lovely, refreshing piece of prose.

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    1. Thank you so very much, Jo.

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  2. I cannot and I should not add any words after the ones of your Six, M.
    Apart from that is a place I know without ever being there… and a song.
    Brava.

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    1. This is an amazing soundboard for my words. Thank you so much.

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  3. not a place for unsteady feet
    ❤︎

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  4. Loved the descriptions 🙂

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    1. Thank you very much!

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  5. It looks beautiful. I understand how one can feel the edge calling.

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    1. Thank you so much for your comment, Mimi.

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  6. Good point about such places: “not a place for unsteady feet” I am glad to hear there is a chaplain around.

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    1. There’s always a chaplain around Beachy Head.

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  7. Beautifully done, Misty.

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    1. Thank you so much, Chris.

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  8. That picture is amazing, almost surreal. It adds an edge to your words that suggest a dance with the spiritual as well as literal world.

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    1. Before Covid trampled my lungs two years ago, I easily walked to the top of that headland and all the way to the one in the far far distance with the lighthouse on its crest. Beachy Head is one of my favourite places in the whole world.

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