10 January: dVerse Quadrille

AI artwork: two rotting wooden rowboats in a reed-thick brackish lagoon .

Skeletal

Tonight’s sunset is tinged scarlet,
bleeding into the lagoon, out
beyond, into the lake, falling through
summer-thick shrubs beyond twilighted memories

where something of the past joins
skeletons of rowboats
in soured brackish water, rotting
like a black heart.

And the setting sun shivers.


Written for dVerse Quadrille “Lagoon”. A Quadrille poem is 44-words (san title) Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2023.

27 responses to “10 January: dVerse Quadrille”

  1. A very evocative poem M

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    1. Thank you, Sadje!

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      1. You’re very welcome 🧡💛💚

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  2. Rotting like a black heart… that is enough for the sun to shiver (and then comes night)

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    1. Definitely. Winter brings out the darkness in me.

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  3. I don’t feel like going into the lagoon. Gave me the heebie jeebies! 😬

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  4. So full of feeling, evocative.

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    1. Thank you so much.

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  5. I love the mystery and descriptive imagery in your quadrille, especially “falling through
    summer-thick shrubs beyond twilighted memories”

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    1. Thank you very much, and thanks for the prompt.

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      1. Very welcome. Thanks for joining!

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  6. “where something of the past joins
    skeletons of rowboats
    in soured brackish water, rotting
    like a black heart.”
    – Wow, fantastic imagery!

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    1. Thank you ever so much.

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  7. “And the setting sun shivers.” Gorgeous poem, Misk!

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    1. Thanks so much, S. ❤️

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  8. Love this from tinged scarlet to shivering sun. Amazing poem as always!

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    1. Thank you so much, Grace.

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  9. Misky, your quadrille is an evocative portrayal of the sunset bleeding into the lagoon. The imagery of skeletons of rowboats and the brackish water resembling a black heart create a haunting and atmospheric tone!

    ~David

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    1. Thank you, David! ❤️

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  10. Peaceful yet dark toned. It’s very visual. Well done!

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    1. Thank you. ❤️

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  11. Not a place I’d want to be after the shivering sun slides away.

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    1. It was an actual place in Ireland. ❤️

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      1. Oh my, Misky. Twice as enchanting on Irish soil!

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