27 August: Amorphous

AI artwork: two women sitting prim and proper in chairs, hands folded. A dog looking at the women.
AI MJ

Amorphous

She remembers the summer
as hot and
prickly dry.

She spent most of it
licking moisture
on her lips,

and then her upper lip peeled,
cracked, and bled
as she gnawed

the twiggish twisty bits
with her lower
teeth.

And then the summer was gone.
Her memories
faltering,

a penny for your porous,
amorphous
thoughts.

And she stares off, wondering
what was she thinking
while her tea went all
stony cold.


Words: 76. Artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

23 responses to “27 August: Amorphous”

  1. The danger of thinking too much!

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    1. Darned tea never stays hot.

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  2. Wow… this is slightly disturbing imagery, Misky… shivers

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    1. The entire thing should give you shivers actually. I beg to differ with anyone who calls these sort of lapses a “senior moment”. I appreciate the comment, David – you don’t usually, and it’s nice.

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  3. You had me from the title.
    Excellent dark ink, M.

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    1. Excellent. Or as they say down at the community centre .. Bingo. I can always rely on you to see the fine tuned dark edge. Good morning, Nick.

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      1. Good morning, M.
        Words darker than their wings…

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        1. Bless that tingle up my spine. Did you hear that last note?!!

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          1. I was hoping you would home-in that note….Yesss!😊🖤

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            1. Alter Bridge – and I’ve never heard of these guys, Nick. My afternoon shall include finding them on Apple Music.

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    1. You’re up earlier than I’d manage to do.

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      1. Frightful dream; no back to sleep for me.

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        1. Oh luv, that’s awful. Maybe that pulled pork is kicking up a fuss.

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  4. Fantastic, M. But if you are not in the mood for a heavier sound as theirs is ( Blackbird is one of my favourites), I strongly suggest you take a listen at Myles Kennedy’s solo work.
    My absolute fav:

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    1. Will do, although I’m not opposed to it. They remind me slightly of Nickelback, who happen to be one of my favourites when Peder is out of the house. He and I have conflicting taste in music, which makes road trips interesting.

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    2. Such a clear and rich voice.

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    3. I found Myles Kennedy Essentials which includes hours of his music. So far, I think my head’s better suited to Myles than Alter Bridge this morning. Thank you so much for the heads-up. Peder likes him also. Yeah!

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      1. Two birds with one stone!
        Don’t mention it, M.
        (After all we owed Peder one after torturing him with NF)

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