22 August: For Ragtag Daily Prompt

AI art people queueing
Queueing Incognito

The Automatic Queueing System

Busy. Their phone is always busy. I should’ve poured a coffee.

I can almost count the leaves falling. Already, it’s the end…

You are number five in the queue.

…of August, and the nights are colder. I smell the scent of wood smoke passing through the neighbourhood …

You are number four in the queue.

…and the oak tree once fluid green is turning yellow, soon desiccated, crumbled and brown, the leaves will drop and clatter and blow in through the open kitchen door.

You are number three in the queue.

There is a bitter sweet scent of white wax in here. Can’t place it really. And I wait for news…

You are number two in the queue.

…wait for test results. Wait for bones to creak and joints to crunch. Wait for falling leaves, to remind me…

You are next in the queue.

…of days I forgot to count, of days I’m afraid I will never be able to change .


For Ragtag Daily Prompt “queue”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

11 responses to “22 August: For Ragtag Daily Prompt”

  1. You’re lucky! I had a system hang up on me yesterday.

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    1. That’s the absolute worst when that happens. Who were you ringing up?

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      1. A chemist. First off, they did not make their number easy to find on their site. Second off, they offered a phone menu where no option was appropriate, third off it cut me off because I did not select an option.

        To make matters worse, I only contacted them in the first place because they have been sending unsolicited emails and I was wanting to ask them nicely, to stop. So I take it up with the Data Commissioner instead.

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        1. Boots does this to me; emails about all sorts of rubbish I have no interest in. And all because they’re the chemist who fills me repeat Rxs. I created a filter that sends them directly into the bin.

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  2. A very poignant ending. Loved this.

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    1. Thank you so very much! I have to admit that I liked the AI artwork that I created for it more than what I wrote … which seems to be more and more the case. Thanks for prompt – I had fun with it.

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  3. Holy sheep!! This is so stealthy powerful, M!!
    And the repetition of You are number… is nothing sort of the anvil pounding.
    (Now I am thinking music to accompany your verses… I already know who could sing it… more about that on Friday😉)

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    1. Oh! Excellent fun to be had on Friday.

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  4. Who says time queuing is time wasted – perhaps it is the new meditation space with progressive announcements rather than gongs – loved this Misky…

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    1. Thanks so much, Andrew!

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