20 August: The Goatherd 3

A artwork: goatherd with his goats on Kenyan landscape
AI MJ

3. When He Was Just a Boy (Draft)

He came here
to escape
the noise.

The honking,
the too many voices all together
and all at once type
noise.

To escape
the streets, and the greasy diesel
brown of the rising sun.

He came here
to survive,
not knowing that the sun’s sharp hip
scars the land, that it

chafes
and cracks the soil,
leaves trees scant and skinny.

Rain never
falls freely here.

And now
he walks all the day,
and talks in soft deft tones that
quiet his goats.

And he keeps
the Miracle Man’s medicine
in his pocket –
its magic keeps thunder
inside clouds

because goats hate
thunder.


140 words. #3 Part of the Goatherd series. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

18 responses to “20 August: The Goatherd 3”

  1. some wonderful images in here. I love “the greasy diesel brown of the rising sun”. followed by “the sun’s sharp hip” and I love “rain never falls freely here”

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    1. Thank you so much, Jo.

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  2. At one time my ambition was to buy a pasture and keep goats.

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    1. My grandmother, the one with half buried rusty cars, she kept goats. And rabbits. And hens. And a cow. She couldn’t keep a husband though. Married four times. I blame the goats.

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      1. Goats are finniky creatures, apparently, far moreso than men!

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    1. Thank you, David

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  3. The goats may hate thunder but maybe a day will come that he will let it roar.
    Keep flying with it, M.
    Thank you for taking us with you as you explore your Muse’s calling.

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    1. Yes, I foresee that one day that thunder will pound the earth. Thank you for the confidence.

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  4. I wonder …
    did you think at the time
    that
    we would see a bit of
    ourselves
    in this fellow?

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    1. No, but I guess that’s possible. 🥰

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  5. The imagery within this story is captivating ❤️ And so his is ability to keep the thunder away 😄

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    1. Thank you very much!

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    1. Thank you, Dorothy!

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  6. Maybe I could borrow some of that medicine to keep the hurricanes away? Wonderful imagery. You inspire me to write better. 🙂 https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/08/the-littlest-spartan.html

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    1. And you keep me highly entertained.

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