
The trouble with Salt
And then the sea dawns. Its salt dissolves into salt, into itself. It’s a new day of slow dehydration. A life-long osmosis into dust and dryness. Dry words, dry humour, dried up and wrinkled … wrinkles on thin skinned; wrinkles in plans; wrinkles in love … And the sea’s tongue grates the sand, roiling and rolling over as we stand in the waves and face the red-eye dawn, the sun rising and the sea grabbing at our ankles. And it dawns on us, this salt cannot dissolve us … as we throw salt over our shoulder and invite the devil to our table.
My footprints are gone
And the sea is still singing
Turning into rain
(Note: this thing is full of metaphors. I just write this stuff; I don’t actually understand it.) For GoDogGo Cafe Haibun Wednesday Prompt “A new dawn” Image is “Blue Seascape, Wave Effect” by Georges Lacombe, 1894 Musée des Beaux-Arts de Rennes, Rennes, France. Public Domain. ©Misky 2022 Shared with #amwriting on Twitter
23 responses to “23.2.22: Haibun Wednesday”
I’ve seen that image before, I loved visiting Rennes so it must have been there. Happy memories.
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Lovely. Here’s to happy memories. We always made Rennes our overnight stop; dinner at one of the sidewalk cafes; a nightcap at the bar where Hemingway used to go (can’t recall its name – on the corner). I agree, Rennes is always worth a return visit.
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Yeah, a favourite weekend haunt. Everything was better in Brittany.
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Mr M says the bar is called the Cubana Café, or something like that.
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I don’t think I know any bars, offhand. We were always with daughter, I think, so tended to stay away.
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And the Favorite Lines Award goes to…
“It’s a new day of slow dehydration. A life-long osmosis into dust and dryness.”
Holy Moley, Misky; you gotta STOP blowin us all away.
(Just kidding, Do NOT stop!)
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❤️❤️
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This is fabulous, Misky. So many brilliant lines. And then the sea dawns. And the seas tongue grates the sand, and this salt cannot dissolve us…. I just love it.
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Aah thank you so much. ❤️
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You’re funny, Misky! 😀
❤
David
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😂🤡
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wow, i am in love with what you have penned here. Such a beautiful way to talk about life!
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Thank you, Leona.
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It’s getting there, Misky. It’s getting there. It is fair to say you show some potential!!!
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I’m so glad you think so; I was about the trade in my pen for a Toblerone.
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If writing is your day job, stick to it girl! 😂
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It’s a good thing that I’m drawing a pension. 😂
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…and still paying our taxes! 😂
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Put it in … Take it out 😂
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I know, I know! 😂
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Love your note…you just write this stuff 😂 – well, you “just” write beautiful stuff!
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Thank you!
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