
What You Don’t See When Your Eyes Are Closed
I hit the ground
running last night.
Like a Sunday matinée,
one of my greatest dreams
of all time. Ever.
And I can’t remember
any of it now.
A vanishing act.
It was epic though.
Like mathematics,
or an opalescent smear on a lake
or like crows staring down
a sunset from
a bare-boned tree.
Dreams,
like some trees that
manage to take root
while others never manage
to play the drums.
But as I said,
I woke from a dream.
It’s amazing what
you don’t see
when your eyes are closed.
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6 responses to “25.1.22 What You Don’t See…”
Absolutely love stanzas 3 & 4. Top notch!
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Thank you!
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Brilliant, Misky. I have such vivid dreams and forget 95% of them the instant I wake up.
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Some are too weird to be remembered. But some are quite entertaining. (sounds like I’m describing a few of my friends…)
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🤣🤣 And it sounds like we share a few of the same friends!
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😂
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