A Very Short da-Dum Waltz

A Very Short da-Dum Waltz

when time was
and the stars
bright in our
we’d dip and
dance my man, roll
to a silver star stroll

The last two lines are like the twirly bit (or something). Written for dVerse Poets “A poem to Waltz-time”  and shared with @Experimentsinfc #APoemADay on Twitter   ©Misky 2021

10 responses to “A Very Short da-Dum Waltz”

  1. Short ~~~ and quite sweet!

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  2. I’m smiling at this silver star waltz: short and very sweet!

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  3. I enjoyed the imagery of strolling to a silver star.


  4. Beverly Crawford avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    So well I remember when time was young and the stars hung bright. Bless me, on occasion they still do!

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  5. I love the image of dancing like that… and I think you still can


  6. “dance my man, roll
    to a silver star stroll”

    great sound all the way thru, and i liked your twirly bit, very well done.

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  7. Short and sweet dance!

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