A Very Short da-Dum Waltz
when time was
young,
and the stars
hung
bright in our
sky,
we’d dip and
rise,
dance my man, roll
to a silver star stroll
The last two lines are like the twirly bit (or something). Written for dVerse Poets “A poem to Waltz-time” and shared with @Experimentsinfc #APoemADay on Twitter ©Misky 2021
10 responses to “A Very Short da-Dum Waltz”
Short ~~~ and quite sweet!
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I’m smiling at this silver star waltz: short and very sweet!
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Thanks! ✨
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I enjoyed the imagery of strolling to a silver star.
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So well I remember when time was young and the stars hung bright. Bless me, on occasion they still do!
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I love the image of dancing like that… and I think you still can
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Enjoyed! 💃
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Thanks!
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“dance my man, roll
to a silver star stroll”
great sound all the way thru, and i liked your twirly bit, very well done.
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Short and sweet dance!
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