AprPAD Day 5

Platform Number 4

Legs crossed like
the number 4, he
reads a book, sets
a backpack at his feet.

Eats rolled lettuces
that drip red sauce.

Home is wherever he
removes his shoes.
Intelligent eyes, and
a face like old lava.

There are some people
you just beg to know.

 

It’s National Poetry Writing Month, which explains the surge in activity. I’m following three different sites generating daily prompts. Writers’ Digest Poetic Asides, the National Poetry Writing Month website (NaPoWriMo) and my old friend, Walt, over at Gnomes. All of these pieces are drafts.



9 responses to “AprPAD Day 5”

  1. I enjoyed this. You painted a clear portrait.

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  2. “a face like old lava.” — nice!

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  3. What an interesting character and journey he has ~ Love to get to know him ~

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  4. Face like old lava is a great image.

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  5. You have such an amazing way with words! “a face like old lava”
    LOVED this post!
    Apologies for the late reading to OLN. Just back from Bermuda and facing Boston’s cold fickle spring with not a crocus or daffodil or tree bud in sight. I’m going to the store tomorrow to buy armloads of daffodils and put them in every room 🙂

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    1. Thanks, Lillian. I have a soft spot for tulips 😁

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  6. Love this character description. Getting to know him would bring even more poems, I think.

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