Three American Sentences All About Weather
I.
Stood on a muddy track, umbrella in hand. A moody slash of rain.
II.
Saw a sculpture. Looked like wizard fingers. Or a seahorse. Rain does that.
III.
You’re out on flattened water. Fishing. As rain slashes at my window.
written for Twiglet #67 “Slash of Rain”
6 responses to “Twiglet #67”
I like the second. Makes me think that wizard’s fingers look like seahorses, and for some reason that tickles me.
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The 2nd is my favourite also.
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Love love LOVE that second one. Rain and clouds both make me see magic.
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That second one is a gem!
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I love ‘a moody slash of rain’!
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I could picture myself ‘in’ all three 🙂
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