dVerse Does Pentimento

A Slow Disappearance

We all shuffle along
to the weight of delusions.
There are days when
I feel young. Beautiful.
Until I look in the mirror.
Beautiful view, you say,
watching snow flurries spin
across the sea, swallowed
into cold cusps of waves.
I can’t compete with nature.
I remember my first kiss;
I closed my eyes tight
and puckered up like
a bugle’s mouth.
Not everything you see
on TV should be repeated.

 

 

dVerse does Pentimento

17 responses to “dVerse Does Pentimento”

  1. Nice phrase: “weight of delusions” It is interesting to see a delusion as weighting one down.

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  2. I think that sometimes we should just let go of mirrors and enjoy…

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    1. It’s impossible to apply lippy without a mirror, darling….

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      1. 🙂 I’m a man remember….

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        1. I promise, I hadn’t forgotten.

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  3. This is so profoundly observant. The kiss line made me laugh in memory.

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    1. I have to admit that line produced a bawdy snort.

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    1. Thanks, Maureen.

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  4. “I can’t compete with nature.” Oh good thing we’re not expected to! It reminds me of the Mao-era slogans where the masses were encouraged to conquer nature. Mother Nature, can you believe that? I also loved the bugle lips of your first kiss. A wonderfully funny hyperbole.

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    1. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it. It was a fun prompt.

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  5. Your last line is perfect. Sums up the whole poem. Nice work!
    Dwight

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  6. This made me smile. Inside, we’re all 17. (or is that on the internet…?) (K)

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  7. Oh….I am chuckling out loud! Puckering up like a bugle! 🙂 I am suddenly reminded of my first kiss, 8th grade, in our house’s den (hoping my parents wouldn’t walk by in the hall because we were not allowed to close the door!), and Cory Owen leaned in, holding my hand, and we smooshed lips together, hard pressing, and then broke away and both turned bright red. 🙂 Oh my…thanks for the memory that has me smiling now 🙂
    And oh yes….you and I are still beautiful my dear. Age simply changes the way beauty is seen….and it becomes more of seeing a soft smile, warm eyes, hands that still hold…:)
    Loving this post.

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    1. It’s lovely to have you back from your adventures. 😀

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  8. I love the snow flurries spin across the sea swallowed by cusps of waves, and the feeling beautiful until I look in the mirror. There is a similarity there. I never trusted mirrors, seems everything is in reverse, and yes beauty is swallowed up by them.

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