Day 14 & 16 NovPAD

Whispered Encomiums

And when the earth is dead,
when it lays stiff and cold
with one candle by its head
and another set at its feet,
we’ll mourn its passing
in whispered encomiums
of bird song and cedars,
blue chiffon skies and seas
salt-dyed and unkempt as
we say rosaries, and recite
from flyblown books as if
celebrating, an Irish wake.

And we all agreed that
we wore-out the fiddler.

 

 

Day 14: American Sonnet and Day 16 A Letter to the World

12 responses to “Day 14 & 16 NovPAD”

  1. I love this and esp the last lines.

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  2. I liked the ending about wearing out the fiddler.

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  3. The title just grabbed me, Misky – good titles are so hard to find! I love the lines:
    ‘we say rosaries, and recite
    from flyblown books as if
    celebrating, an Irish wake’.

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  4. I agree, that is one fantastic title! Love; “we say rosaries, and recite from flyblown books as if celebrating, an Irish wake.” Beautifully penned!

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    Perfect, and the close the whole truth.
    Anna :o]

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  6. I do love this.. though it’s sad theme.. the dying and the wake that can mean so much

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  7. kaykuala

    And we all agreed that
    we wore-out the fiddler.

    A sad moment can be made into a joyous occasion? The fiddler certainly has a lot going for him!

    Hank

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  8. Great image for me of the earth lying with one candle by its head
    and another set at its feet. Really fine.

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  9. The wake theme reasonates with me as well as the beauty of that blue chiffon sky ~ A gem to read this morning ~

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  10. I like he flow and he imagery, but am puzzled by the earth dead and people alive.

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