dVerse Verbifies

Let’s Talk Fog

The fog conceived this stomach sky,
cut so thick it’s stepped,
a smoke-steeping attitude,
it’s a fine sort of blasé.
The world Mayed and greened,
and diesel-eyed dark,
and the air speaks of lost fire.

 

 

written for dVerse “Verbified” and Poetic Asides “Let’s …

11 responses to “dVerse Verbifies”

  1. “Mayed and greened” — LOVE.
    “Stomach sky” is also fantastic.

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    1. I had a lot of difficulty with this one!

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      1. You rocked it. Your talent always shines through your own doubts. 😉

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  2. I liked the phrase: “The world Mayed and greened”

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  3. Yes, outstanding verbs… and the stomach sky.. great write.

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  4. I love fog and the phrases ‘conceived this stomach sky’, ‘a smoke-steeping attitude’, ‘The world Mayed and greened’ and, especially ‘the air speaks of lost fire’ – wish I’d thought of that one!.

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  5. This is excellent!! I love “The world Mayed and greened” and “the air speaks of lost fire”.. inspired!❤️

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  6. So excited that you used “Mayed”. I had toyed with the idea of verbifying a month but it didn’t pan out. I also love “diesel-eyed dark”.

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  7. “the world diesel-eyed dark” —– LOVE this line. I think it is applicable to the US right now….but then I’ll put a line from the poem after yours next to it:
    “and hope electrons through the night.” 🙂

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    1. Yes, I like that. xx

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  8. Cutting through the fog to the beauty of your words. Well played, Marilyn!

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