Miz Quickly’s Day 24: Spiral

When Twiddling Your Thumbs Just Won’t Do

I’ve emptied the fridge.
There’s a shallow pool
of water on the floor, and
a repairman is due in an hour.
Appointment times are
an opportunity to fidget,

so I rearrange cupboards,
restock tinned veg and beans,
realign spice jars,
fill canisters with rice,
with flour,
with sugar,
with salt,
toss out expired yeast,
revise the shopping list,
eat the last pickle that’s
floating in brine,
clean the oven door,
reset the kitchen clock
because an inaccurate clock
isn’t a clock at all,
then I find my lost pen,
and read the morning post.

And I wait. Wait, as time
spirals toward his arrival.
Such are the joys of scripting
your own time, and watching
sunlight unexpectedly settle
on an empty dining room chair.

 

 

written for Miz Quickly, Day 24: Spiral and inspired by dVerse’s word “Waiting”.

16 responses to “Miz Quickly’s Day 24: Spiral”

  1. So so good. You make waiting feel tangible and solid. I too need to wash my oven door. I am inspired!

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    1. Nothing worse than an oven door with baked-on muck that won’t come off. 🙂

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  2. One thing nice about waiting at home is there are usually plenty of things to do! Nice list poem.

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    1. Thanks, Victoria, and the repairman fixed the fridge, too!

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  3. So, Misky, did you get any thumb-twiddling time in after / during all that?! 😉

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    1. Did a bit while watching Silent Witness; it wasn’t that good this week. 😉

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  4. I love that last line, especially. Counting Crows have this fantastic song line:
    “to see the way that light attaches to a girl”

    Reminds me of that. Wonderful.

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    1. I don’t know that group. I’ll have to Google them this afternoon. 🙂

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      1. They are poet-songwriters, for sure. Check out August and Everything After, if you get the chance.

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      2. Mmm. Nice. I’m listening to “Omaha”. Rather like that.

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      3. “Anna Begins” and “Raining in Baltimore” are my favorites, but it’s the culmination of the whole album that most pleases me. Minus “Mr. Jones.” It’s a good song; it was just way too popular when it came out, so it got wearing.

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        1. I’m so happy they’re all on You Tube!

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  5. Wonderful, Misky. You sure got a lot accomplished while waiting. I love how you noticed the light

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    1. The repairman was very late. (grrrr)

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  6. Waiting, working, then sunlight and spirals. An interesting meditation on spiral and time.

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  7. It is a bit of a spiral of time when a service person gives you an open window of an hour or so to their arrival. Can’t they say when and be prompt?

    But you’ve made good use of your time spiraling words 🙂

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