Twiglet #5: A Cold Radiator

And That’s All I Know

I was born in a pocket-sized
skinny town that was pelted
with a great deal of want.

Our neighbour was a large man,
reminded me of a cold radiator,
or a kettle full of thunder.

I recall that he had impeccable
aim; he could pee on a gnat
before it could think to fly.

Someone said he bought a farm,
used to sing to his corn, and
shoot crows. Others said that

he was intimate with honey.
That’s all I know about him.

 

 

written for Twiglet #5: “a cold radiator”. Twiglets is a new writing prompt blog that uses short phrases to inspire writing. Join in at The Twiglets on Tuesdays. Each prompt last the week long.

8 responses to “Twiglet #5: A Cold Radiator”

  1. So many great descriptors in this short but insightful piece. Well done.

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  2. This is a feast of imagery and delight. I’ve never met anyone like this fellow, but I’ve met him in another. I love the sense of uniqueness, the way your poem makes the town sound so fantastic that I want to travel there… but I will never eat the honey. 😉

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    1. He’s completely fictitious, just for the record. 🙂

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      1. That’s what makes the poem wonderful. We all know that this man doesn’t exist, but deep in our minds… we know that somewhere, in a tiny town, he lives… and gnats are extremely unhappy. 😀

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  3. this kind of reminds me of those “I am from” poems – but with it’s own take, which makes it so wonderful – and as everyone has said, the power of the descriptive, the particular choice of words, it really stirs up some wonderful, albeit odd, imagery 🙂

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    1. Sometimes it’s fun to go for odd-ball!

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      1. Absolutely!

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