
To a Moon Trellis
Night’s trellis to stars
Like a tarantula’s reach
Such a tangled web

To a Moon Trellis
Night’s trellis to stars
Like a tarantula’s reach
Such a tangled web
Thank you!
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Cloudy night where you are?
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Exquisite wordplay. Loved it.
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Ah.. yes.. child hood wonder
watching moon chase our
car in window way across
the North sky.. like a playground
friend
who
actually
wanted to
play with me..
Moon.. a friend
then.. Nature rest
and God the same..
beauty
of an
outcast..
getting friendly
with Mother Nature more..
and sure now.. wiTh words aS well..:)
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Totally exquisite writing, Misky…you’re amazing, and love your haiku! Perfection.
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I agree, amazing imagery of the moon Misky ~ Your haiku is superb:
Night’s trellis to stars
Like a tarantula’s reach
Such a tangled web
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The haiku made me clap with delight. Such an amazing write…your wordsmithing here is incredible.
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You really captured the magic, in the text and in that incredible haiku.
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A rich haibun with stunning imagery and wordplay!
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Magical!
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Love your moon dressed in night. Such great imagery throughout!
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