dVerse Haibun #22

Ten Doves on Her Roof

She says she wants them gone. Ten white doves on her roof. They’ve nested below the solar panels, there where warmth is a gathered renewable. There where two doves are now ten. There where white feathers fall lazy as February snow. There where fledglings pace the roof, grasp at courage to trust their wings. I watched one stride the ridge all day, back and forth. To and fro. Small and fragile. White, so white. It stood, frozen on the spot until its mother nudged it to the edge. It walked. It walked. And then it fell. Its mother watching from the roof. She stared down for hours. Expected it to move. Hoping. Every mother places a burden of hope on their child. But it didn’t move. Every mother knows despair, too.

Summer left us, chilled
Birds hammering through winter
Some never return

 

for dVerse Haibun #22. Extraordinary Days

17 responses to “dVerse Haibun #22”

  1. I have seen a baby bird die falling from the nest too ~ And yes, the mother knows despair. Enjoyed the musings from the mother’s point of view, such a good metaphor Misky ~ Some indeed never return ~

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  2. This is so sad, the mother waiting, tied to the fact the we might see them as pests… there is so much compassion in the natural death if we see it close at hand… and no many (more than some) never return.

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  3. The mistake of the mother of the fledgling dove – she’ll come back human in her next life.

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  4. I love “warmth is a gathered renewable” — and I felt the mourning of that mama. So sad.

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  5. So sad and so poignant. Feathered mothers get it wrong too when they push their child too hard before it is ready.

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  6. Love this: “There where white feathers fall lazy as February snow.”

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  7. Some never even get started 😦

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  8. So many emotions and visions in this poem I don’t know where to start. The overall white starkness and then sudden motion followed by stillness.

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  9. yes, summer is leaving. but the winter birds and the frosty woodland makes for great writing material!

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  10. This is so delicately and tenderly written , Misky, and so sad to read.

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  11. This is so heart-wrenching 😦 especially “Every mother places a burden of hope on their child. But it didn’t move. Every mother knows despair, too.”

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  12. So much comes into play in this witnessing of the baby bird pacing, getting up the nerve to launch…and “White, so white.” Poor baby bird and poor, despairing mama…now just why were they not wanted on that roof? I’m enamored of nature and how it all plays out…thanks for sharing, Misky.

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  13. Laura Bloomsbury avatar
    Laura Bloomsbury

    she wanted them gone and some never came back – an extraordinary piece of writing –

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  14. Every mother places a burden
    of hope on their child.

    Very true, Misky all mothers do! They put every confidence in them. Unfortunately in this case it did not turn out right!

    Hank

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  15. Makes me wonder how much instinct vs. animal personality was involved, but I’m probably the only weirdo that would think of that. I question nature when I shouldn’t but this scenario really makes me wonder.

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  16. This goes straight to the heart. You brought about many emotions in this piece. Very well written.

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  17. Heart-wrenching, tender story that can be read on so many levels.

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