Dazzled by dVerse

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Midnight on London Road

They’ve cleaned the streets,
water racing into shallows, into
rushing rivers toward the curb.
The road glares up at me, all slick
silver and black from street lamps
shining, like moon-struck pearls,
hanging, dazzling me. And a cab
goes by. Someone going somewhere,
I suppose. The tyres; the water;
the noise wakes a tramp. He rolls over,
pulls himself deeper into shadows.
Shuffles comfort into his spine.
He knows he’s going nowhere,
like a river going nowhere.
It just glitters cold and thin.

 
 

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20 responses to “Dazzled by dVerse”

  1. This is so powerful for me…….I am on that road with you here….seeing slick, the glare of the lights…….and picturing the tramp (such a hard, monosyllabic word) as a river in the throes of winter – that layer of thin glittering black ice — so cold there is no rivulet. The comparison is awesome! A wonderful take on the prompt!

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  2. Misky, this just glistens. I can feel the streets being washed clean.

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  3. This feels almost like a classic movie… the noir and gleam of London nights.

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  4. This reminded me so much of my London days, heading home early early early in the morning. You really capture the feel of those clean streets, and the remnants of night life.
    “He knows he’s going nowhere,
    like a river going nowhere.
    It just glitters cold and thin.”
    What a fantastic ending.

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  5. Such an elegant write 😀

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  6. PURE FRUSTRATION!!! I’m back at the “bar” this morning and going over posts I already commented on yesterday — and somehow, on some of them, my comments are not appearing. My internet connection goes in and out here — too much cement in high rises in Boston??? — so perhaps that’s it. But here I am, going though all the posts to insure my words are seen. I’m hoping this hasn’t happened in the past and folks think I’m not commenting? UGH>

    Anyway — what I wrote before was something like this:
    I am right there with you on this road at midnight — that slick glare on the black street — black ice perhaps? — And what I really thought was quite amazing was the description of the tramp — that word is so harsh, so monosyllabic — and comparing him to the thin ice layer on a river that no longer moves or ripples in this kind of cold. His thinness, his frailty, the starkness really comes through.

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    1. WordPress seems to think you’re a spammer. I’ve approved your pending comments, so all should be okay.

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  7. Wow, Misky, this one has knocked me for six. As they say, you can take the girl out of London but you can’t take London out of the girl. You made me homesick until I got to the last lines and I thought, Yes, I’ll stick to visits. Such a clever twist.

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  8. this is just elegant!
    you make me want to come see it with my own eyes.

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  9. London’s street lamps and tramp feel damp…and your writing dazzles!

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  10. Tom Waits should read this out loud.

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  11. The road glares up at me, all slick
    silver and black from street lamps
    shining, like moon-struck pearls……. you take me right into the scene with you – wonderful

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  12. I am so drawn to the analogy of the homeless and the river going nowhere. The streets are clean, but all is not well.

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  13. A very sad entry….

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  14. True.. A lonely homeless person
    can live in aPArtments high
    with never a human
    touch
    and the
    razzle dazzle
    of the group of homeless
    people with each other’s
    twinkling starry blissed
    eYes and sKin under a
    bridge wHeRe A
    home within
    can be shared
    as warmth
    like no
    otHer…
    sMiles.. often
    folks judge A homeless
    person by their clothes.. but
    rarely do they go out on the beat
    and
    feel
    tHeir heARt
    as aliVe and isREAL.. WiTh Nature One..
    sure.. i’ve been.. homeless and rich too..
    Screaming to the sKeYes of God for one drop
    of a
    homeless
    heArt FiLLed WiTh liGht..
    thanks.. inspired by your poem..
    and the many homeless people
    i’ve actuAlly talked to..
    too.. under
    bridges
    oF LiGht..
    and sure.. the
    fAct that it was
    at a beach.. helps the mood too..
    People aren’t evolved well to live in dreary places..;)

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    1. A light that always shines brighter! Thank you.

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      1. To spread my friEnd..:)

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  15. I suppose. The tyres; the water;
    the noise wakes a tramp. He rolls over,
    pulls himself deeper into shadows

    It conveys a picture of an alleyway where he was disturbed from sleep but to nothingness. He rolled over and continues! Hank can almost see the movements in the dark! Great lines Misky!

    Hank

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  16. Beautiful. I like your juxtaposition of the nice clean streets and the people passing by with the tramp. Some are mobile, some are, sadly, not.

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  17. What a fantastic snapshot of a moment.

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