Poetic Bloomings: 16 July

The Summer We Lost Childhood

We were 6th grade. The big kids,
and we walked the rail line.
Its steel shining, a thin string
of silver silk that disappeared
into the distance as if
swallowed by trees and life’s path.
It was a balancing game. Practise.
To see who’d go the farthest.

Those summers were full of inaudible
wishes, butterfly wings quivering
in the breeze like a blue flame.
Even back then, nature drew us
into hushed motion, extreme silence
just before a storm, and somewhere
on that railway line, we lost
childhood’s magic. We stopped
speaking long before we were dead.

 
© Misky 2016
 
for Poetic Bloomings “Summer Magic

2 responses to “Poetic Bloomings: 16 July”

  1. An excellent poem full of hope, angst and melancholy. Much for the emotions in this one Marilyn!

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  2. Wow…this is poised with beauty and tender aching of heart…l love this description of the tracks…

    “a thin string
    of silver silk that disappeared
    into the distance as if
    swallowed by trees and life’s path.”

    Wonderful, Misk!!

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