dVerse Does Summer

What better blessing than to move without hurry under trees?”
— by Naomi Shihab Nye

The Summer of 1958

Those summer days when the sun grew –
those were my spun white flats days.
Long as ribbons, a satin sheen across
the skies, and the hills soaking up nasal
sting of pine, and paths of pebble crunch.
I played in shallow streams of watercress,
and I ran — everywhere,
childhood is for running,
chasing simple days
catching simple light.
Our house was a solid white beacon,
its green awnings heavy with stripe sleep
against the sun, and there were trees
and soaker-hoses and clover in the grass,
and the only thing that stopped me
was the Sabbath — it held me spinning
in place, until I was set free again.

 

 

Written for dVerse Poets “Summer” prompt and inspired by “Last August Hours Before the Year 2000” by Naomi Shihab Nye

40 responses to “dVerse Does Summer”

  1. I love how it evoked a memory that remains vivid and heartfelt, Marilyn! Thanks for sharing this!

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    1. I swear that I could smell the pine and the grass when I wrote this. Oddest thing that.

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  2. Gosh, lovely. I wasn’t around in 1958, but it reminds me of my own growing up summers in the 1970s :). I feel deliciously warm and lazy now.

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    1. Lovely. Wishing you a memorable summer, Freya.

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  3. I just loved this…the irony is that I have an old poem I wrote years ago titled “The Summer of 1948.” I’d forgotten about it. We were fortunate to grow up when life was simpler and kept us outside.

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  4. Our house was a solid white beacon,
    its green awnings heavy with stripe sleep
    against the sun, and there were trees

    Such beautiful & heart warming memories 🙂
    Lovely write.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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    1. Thank you, Sanaa!

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  5. Oh! I just want to breathe this, in and out, until it sticks:
    “childhood is for running,
    chasing simple days
    catching simple light.”

    OH. Just so lovely.

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  6. So much that is symbolic in your use of colors; the greens and whites. The holiness and innocence of childhood, playing off of the Sabbath and the water. I see allusions of baptisms and salvation, and, oh my, I could go on… This is brilliantly done!

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    1. I’m delighted you found so much in it to like!

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  7. A wonderful description of childhood summer.

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    1. Thanks, Sherry!

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  8. Oh, yes! This piece is so true; it conjures up memories of things I’ve never experienced. I want to rest in your poem. Thank you!

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  9. The simple life of childhood.. To just run in that wonderful summer days.

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  10. I can see and feel your free and happy childhood.

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    1. And happily I have a head stuffed with those memories, whereas my grandchildren will have memories of playing indoors. Pity.

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      1. not mine. Younger grandson roams free in peaceful village, climbs mountains, canoes, cycles etc.

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        1. My granddaughter is busy with hyper-organised activities, scouts, after school language lessons, conformation lessons, ballet for a while but she quit, but she’s not learnt to create her own entertainment, or learnt how NOT to be bored. Oh well, I could go on about this for ages but this isn’t quite the right platform. And besides, I think I’m a bit grumpy this morning; horrendous electrical storms and it rained all night. Didn’t sleep. 😐

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          1. Me neither. Sheet lightning continuous for hours and VERY noisy thunder. Jock is flying to UK at lunchtime, so I’m keeping an eye on the live lightning site.

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            1. I’ll keep him in my thoughts and hope his flight goes well. (… And here comes the rain again!) Not good for voter turnout, I fear.

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  11. Your poem reminds me of childhood summers, running free and one thing that I always associate with summer is vapour trails in the sky, of which your poem reminded me in the lines:
    ‘ those were my spun white flats days.
    Long as ribbons, a satin sheen across
    the skies,…’

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    1. When I was 7 or 8, vapour trails were a rarity. Not so anymore!

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  12. That childhood freedom, running, with a safe base. Beautiful images in my head now, thank you.

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    1. I’m glad that you liked it.

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    Josslyn Rae Turner

    Beautiful poetry, Misky!

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    1. Glad you like it. Thanks!

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        Josslyn Rae Turner

        You’re welcome! 🙂

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  14. What a splendid memory of a childhood summer. I love this: “childhood is for running.” Childhood was a time of savoring summer in a way we adults have long forgotten.

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    1. Thank you, Linda.

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  15. Oh how beautiful and restful is this poem. I played in shallow streams of watercress….what a wonderful green and fresh image this is. I love it.

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    1. Thank you very much!

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  16. can i come play at your house? promise not to wear shoes:)

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  17. Every word of this resonates with me. I adore “childhood is for running…..” So true..I feel the children of today are deprived. Thanks for bringing back memories.

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    1. I’m very glad to have shared it with you.

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  18. Oh, letting out a huge sigh here. Wonderful wonderful wonderful. I am transported back to the summers of youth. And the ending is quite special!

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    1. I’m delighted you like it. Thank you!

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