dVerse’s Character Study

redHairWoamn

And Run

Same time,
every day.
She runs.
I’m finishing the breakfast dishes,
up to my wrists in hot soapy water,
and there she goes,
she’s a shot of sun.
Her red hair’s often a shapeless flame,
but today it’s tied up in a brass knot –
and she runs.
I’d love to run that like,
every movement is scripted,
tireless justification of feet.
Mile after mile.
I rinse the last dish,
turn off the tap,
and the dog wakes up,
scratches at her ear like
a flea-racked squirrel.
The dog and I, we both wish
we could run
like that girl,
maybe carry the colours
of some triumphal memory.
And run.

 

 

for dVerse Poets, Walt’s “Character Study” prompt

22 responses to “dVerse’s Character Study”

  1. My goodness 😀 she sounds like a dream that’s come to life. Especially adore the reference to “colours of some triumphal memory.” Beautifully penned.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  2. Love the shock of red hair in the photo — and standing by the window doing dishes — such a commonplace place and task that I can be the person watching her run….wonderfully done! I want to reach out and scratch that dog 🙂

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    1. She’d love that. She loves a good scratch.

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  3. A perfect scenario, well expressed. A very visual read. Quite the effective sketch, Marilyn!

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    1. Thank you, Walt, and thanks for the prompt.

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  4. I do meet them… also when I’m trying to run myself… and that flare of red hair (or maybe some colored clothes)… all that energy… a great portrait.

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    1. Thank you! Glad you liked it.

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  5. I love how you described the runner:

    she’s a shot of sun.
    Her red hair’s often a shapeless flame

    How I wish I can run like her too, now I am just walking 🙂

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    1. Walking here also – I couldn’t run if I tried anymore. When I was in my 20s, I was fairly good sprinter, but that was a long time ago. >

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  6. I’ve never been a runner – I was behind the door when the gave out long legs. But I really enjoyed your wishful thinking poem.

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    1. I still have the long legs but they’re not as flexible as they used to be. 🙂

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  7. Lovely bit of longing here!

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  8. You kNow.. it’s funny.. iN fAct
    it’s hilarious.. i’M literAlly kNown
    as a Legend of Dance noW at
    close to 56 in young
    folk Dance hAll..
    but seriously..
    my hips are
    so bad from
    running young
    and knees too..
    that i cannot run
    at all now from doing
    that repetitive movement
    for a decade back then.. but
    dancing.. keeping feet close to
    earth.. yes.. close to 5400 miles
    now measured by GPS sports
    watch in 33 months.. and
    honestly all 230LBS of
    me feels liGht
    as a feather..
    there are
    ways to
    fly without
    running at aLL..
    and seriously.. when i
    tell folks i cannot run
    at all they do not believe it
    at all as they watch me float
    by in twinkle toe feat of MaGiC Air..
    Truly.. the best friend of energy is
    a friEnd of Gravity mY friEnd..
    for literAlly
    aGinG graceFuLLy
    iN ButterFly WinGed feat..:)

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    1. Dance in, my friend, dance on! 😀

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      1. Always!
        Yes!
        Dance..:)!
        And
        Sing..:)!

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  9. Love love LOVE this, especially:
    “she’s a shot of sun.”

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    1. Thank you, De. I’m always pleased to hear your opinion.

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  10. Oh to be young and free of foot – personally i’d rather finish the dishes and cuddle the dog..running is sweaty and hurts!

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  11. Watching the girl with red hair, wishing…perhaps seeing what was?

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