dVerse Haibun #13

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West Beach

The sea breaks just inches from where I stand. It’s a cannon’s crash in my ears. A tempest. A churning purgatory. We’re walking fast along this wet sand, the tide pushing us faster, the beach paperflat and straight into the west sky, and we’re barefoot. Mom says it’s good for the arches of our feet. And it removes calluses. My sister complains of blisters. Mom ignores her nasal whines, concentrates on her own direction, walks like a postman who’d rather be Santa Claus delivering cheer. My sister and I, we can’t keep up, and for the next two hours we chase after this tall women, her grey hair a woven mass from the wind and her mustard-brown cardigan flapping like a lose tongue behind her.

 

We spy on the world.
You. Me. For transparency
And a place to survive.

 
 

written for dVerse Poets: Haibun #13

20 responses to “dVerse Haibun #13”

  1. I believe in the healing powers of the sea for our feet, lungs & spirit ~ Your mother is a blessing & I admire how you described her walk ~

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    1. Thanks, Grace. She’s 90, and still walks like a postman.

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  2. A really beautiful and hopeful scene.

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    1. Thanks. I’m glad you liked it.

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  3. You have such a conversational style — I feel as if we’re chatting together while I’m skipping along side you and your mom on this walk! I especially love this description “her mustard-brown cardigan flapping like a lose tongue behind her.”
    And yes, my mother used to tell me that walking barefoot was good for the arches! 🙂

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    1. Thank you, Lillian. That’s lovely to know. 😀 glad you liked it.

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  4. The haiku closing the beautiful prose … the last line took my breath away!

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  5. “….walks like a postman who’d rather be Santa Claus delivering cheer.” how beautiful is the description…yes only a mother can be like that…love the haiku…

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  6. Love this, especially:
    “the beach paperflat and straight into the west sky”

    And that flapping tongue sweater. Wonderful!

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    1. And it was truly paperflat and straight!

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  7. Oh I feel that the good intentions of a mother is not always appreciated… Maybe later, much later it will be appreciated.

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    1. I come from a family of walkers. My dad was a postman back in the days when a route was truly walked. 😀

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  8. Wonderful image of your mother still striding out ahead of you.

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  9. I love it all but my favorite is the part about her sweater. That is an exquisite detail!

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    1. Thanks, Carol. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

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  10. Rosemary Nissen-Wade avatar
    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    Very atmospheric!

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