A Golden Shovel for dVerse

Unimportant Strangers

I was all eyes and hands back then, each
moment rosy smiles or a quick descent
into dusty tears. Five years old. Such is
the way of small hands, little limbs, and as

I chased the summer, graceful
as butterflies I chased, as
the dust rising underfoot, I saw the sky as a
vein of blue, an azure sinking
in the sun. Sinking as a ship,

that sun shone a dreamy stone, but
distant as a thousand years. Less
a treasure I’d never seen, blue tragic
into a lost light, falling somehow –

like a penny from a pocket, discarded because
no one saw its value. These
small lost tokens, memories as they are,
forgotten as unimportant strangers.

 
 

The last word of each line is taken from a poem by Rigoberto Gonzalez “The Strangers Who Find Me in the Woods”. Written for dVerse Poets, poetic form: Golden Shovel

13 responses to “A Golden Shovel for dVerse”

  1. Misky, this is breathtakingly beautiful.
    THIS:
    “I saw the sky as a
    vein of blue, an azure sinking
    in the sun.”

    And that “sun shone a dreamy stone.” Sigh.
    Wish I’d written that. 😉

    Lovely Golden Shovel, ma’am. So glad you came out to play!

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    1. Thanks for reminding me how much a Golden Shovel is to write.

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  2. Less
    a treasure I’d never seen, blue tragic
    into a lost light, falling somehow –
    like a penny from a pocket, discarded because
    no one saw its value.

    Such incredible lines here ❤
    Beautifully penned 🙂

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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    1. Thanks, Sanaa. ❤️

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  3. Lovely. I especially like the title and the opening lines. Presenting this from the perspective of a child really adds something specially to the poem.

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    1. Oops, auto correct got me. “ssmething. special”

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  4. I chased the summer, graceful
    as butterflies I chased…. just one of the beautiful lines you wrote.

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  5. A sense of sad romance in this delightful poem…like a lover lost to time…

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  6. Beautifully written as one thinks back at being five and what all that meant. But this speaks to me as something sinister and dark befalling that child…I wonder why.

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  7. This so adoringly beautiful, somehow though the last stanza speaks to me of how fast childhood is lost…

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  8. small lost tokens, memories as they are,
    forgotten as unimportant strangers.

    How very true Misky! Small pennies are not appreciated but forgetting sentimental values are those not easily forgotten. You did well to remind us, Ma’am!

    Hank

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  9. Lovely interpretation of your chosen
    Line, Marilyn. A sadness at the final lines; rather evocative.

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  10. So many nice lines in here — already cited by others above. Such a melancholy nostalgia running throughout. Nice work, Misk!

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