Sunday Whirl #247

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First Thing This Morning

It’s like a car crash. You don’t have to see it happen, to know that it did — the sight of glass, shattered fine as seashells, bits stretched across the road, and tyre tracks left as a dark memory where it stopped, rested at the base of an old lamp post. It was like that, a car crash; you didn’t see it, but knew it happened – the grass covered with white feathers, sprinkled like bright glass across the lawn, some caught on a breeze in silent tumble and shuffle between rattling traffic. But no bird to been seen. Probably towed off by a cat. Odd how soon we forget a car crash when the car’s not ours.

White frantic feathers
Tempest in a gorgon’s mouth
Another car crash

 
 

written for Sunday Whirl 247. Words: forget stretch rest left hole lost sight first shell feathers rattle old

12 responses to “Sunday Whirl #247”

  1. This comparison is such strong imagery: “glass, shattered fine as seashells.”

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  2. Very nice. I was drawn to the sound devices throughout, flows well.

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    1. Thank you, Mark.

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  3. My immediate reaction when seeing such a scene is always “Thank heavens it was not me” and then to slow down a bit just in case.

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    1. Human nature, isn’t it. Slow down for a look. 😉

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  4. Our barn cat seems to think, “So many birds, so little time.” I love this piece, as I often see the carnage in the yard. Poor birds. I do have to say though, that I’m happy that the mice stay away.

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    1. It’s rats that I find revolting but the local cats are afraid of taking them on.

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  5. And yet one day it will be and we will never forget – a powerful mix of prose and poem and illustration – all bound together like glass and feathers..

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    1. Thank you, Jae Rose. I always enjoy reading your thoughtful comments.

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  6. Thoroughly convincing – very much like a memory – I really enjoyed how you used the haibun form – a perfect haiku!

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    1. It is a memory; feathers all over the place yesterday. 😀

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      1. Ah … poor bird, well I knew there was a poor bird of course in the middle of all this .. but I didn’t realize that the memory was quite so recent!

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